10 Responses so far.

1. 

   Gerjan says:

   21:39

   Nice job! I have a few corrections though:
   
   You were young
   You had time
   on your hands and I
   Was a rollercoaster of the kind that needs to ride so high
   to die so low
   All the time I had to keep you close
   
   Not finally now
   How we must have hurt
   To see all of your love and care
   Only work a little while and then I go
   All the time I had to keep you close
   
   What you feel is what you get
   You know there is no answer fit
   We broke the code so long ago
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   Just like on the day we met
   You pulling on me like a cigarette
   So like the seaholes to the shore
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   
   Now the years turn away to make you forget
   Make me stare at the same place …
   that the path we are on
   is the path we chose
   I still remember how to keep you close
   Linger on, linger on in the scheme of things
   we're only inhabiting on oh
   Dreams still come true
   It`s the way it goes
   And in the meantime I will hold you close
   And in my heart and in my head
   You are the only dream I dread
   The fear will keep me on my toes
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   
   Just like on the day we met
   You pulling on me like a cigarette
   So like the seaholes to the shore
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   
   So is this what they mean about moving on
   Is this really the end
   You won`t stick around the one that stays
   You are the one that throws
   I`m the one that is kept you close
   … of constant change
   Transformation what we hope stays the same
   Cold is the breeze but forever blows
   One of the hands that would have had kept you close
   ...is when days ahead …
   So when I see should I just pretend
   The flower is cut but it still grows
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   Just like on the day we met
   I`m pulling on you like a cigarette
   So like the seaholes to the shore
   I`m going to keep you ever close

   
2. 

   catherina says:

   07:25

   thanks for the corrections - nice job too

   
3. 

   Lucie says:

   10:03

   Agree with Gerjan's corrections ;) also I think I hear "like the sea holds to the shore"?

   
4. 

   Lucie says:

   17:15

   I like your title, by the way :D

   
5. 

   catherina says:

   10:32

   fits better = like the sea holds to the shore
   Thank you

   
6. 

   Jolien says:

   00:14

   Tried to fill in the blanks :)
   
   You were young
   You had time
   on your hands and I
   Was a rollercoaster of the kind that needs to ride so high
   to dive so low
   All the time I had to keep you close
   
   Not finally now
   How we must have hurt
   To see all of your love and care
   Only work a little while and then I go
   All the time I had to keep you close
   
   What you feel is what you get
   You know there is no answer fit
   We broke the code so long ago
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   Just like on the day we met
   You pulling on me like a cigarette
   So like the sea holds to the shore
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   
   Now the years turn away to make you forget
   Make me stare at the same place
   worrying that the path we are on
   is the path we chose
   I still remember how to keep you close
   Linger on, linger on in the scheme of things
   we're only inhabiting on oh
   Dreams still come true
   It`s the way it goes
   And in the meantime I will hold you close
   And in my heart and in my head
   You are the only dream I dread
   The fear will keep me on my toes
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   
   Just like on the day we met
   You pulling on me like a cigarette
   So like the sea holds to the shore
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   
   So is this what they mean about moving on
   Is this really the end
   You won`t stick around the one that stays
   You are the one that throws
   I`m the one that is kept you close
   ... definition of constant change
   Transformation what we hope stays the same
   Cold is the breeze but forever blows
   One of the hands that would have had kept you close
   Coldness is what lays ahead
   So when I see should I just pretend
   The flower is cut but it still grows
   I`m going to keep you ever close
   Just like on the day we met
   I`m pulling on you like a cigarette
   So like the sea holds to the shore
   I`m going to keep you ever close

   
7. 

   mrmario says:

   16:07

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8. 

   mrmario says:

   16:41

   edit: I think it should be "Like the seagulls to the shore" (zee meeuwen)

   
9. 

   Erik says:

   17:33

   I guess it should be, "I'm the one that has kept you close"

   
10. 

    Anonymous says:

    00:53

    A few things that sounded different to me:
    
    'Not finally now, how we must have hurt'
    
    should be
    
    'Now I finally know how it must have hurt'
    
    AND
    
    '.. definition of constant change
    
    Transformation what we hope stays the same
    
    Cold is the breeze but forever blows
    
    One of the hands that would have kept ypu close'
    
    Should be
    
    'And is this definition of constant change: (not sure about this though)
    
    Transformation, what we hope stays the same
    
    Cold's the breeze that forever blows
    
    Warm are the hands that have kept you close'

    

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