tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post6919496021683310692..comments2023-10-30T16:41:12.312+01:00Comments on Pocket Revolution: Keep you close lyrics (first draft)Bart Van Bellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01600515842832160377noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-6892018858704794432011-09-15T00:53:16.945+02:002011-09-15T00:53:16.945+02:00A few things that sounded different to me:
'N...A few things that sounded different to me:<br /><br />'Not finally now, how we must have hurt' <br /><br />should be <br /><br />'Now I finally know how it must have hurt'<br /><br />AND<br /><br />'.. definition of constant change<br /><br />Transformation what we hope stays the same<br /><br />Cold is the breeze but forever blows<br /><br />One of the hands that would have Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-85637923471533947872011-09-12T17:33:26.671+02:002011-09-12T17:33:26.671+02:00I guess it should be, "I'm the one that h...I guess it should be, <i>"I'm the one that <b>has</b> kept you close"</i>Erikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14248681282478848353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-31176562020778167062011-08-27T16:41:15.140+02:002011-08-27T16:41:15.140+02:00edit: I think it should be "Like the seagulls...edit: I think it should be "Like the seagulls to the shore" (zee meeuwen)mrmariohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11196128416726821065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-45241376018072748532011-08-27T16:07:07.655+02:002011-08-27T16:07:07.655+02:00This comment has been removed by the author.mrmariohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11196128416726821065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-79063522537488601332011-08-03T00:14:23.029+02:002011-08-03T00:14:23.029+02:00Tried to fill in the blanks :)
You were young
Yo...Tried to fill in the blanks :)<br /><br />You were young <br />You had time<br />on your hands and I <br />Was a rollercoaster of the kind that needs to ride so high<br />to <i>dive</i> so low<br />All the time I had to keep you close<br /><br />Not finally now<br />How we must have hurt<br />To see all of your love and care<br />Only work a little while and then I go<br />All the time I had to Jolienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16307765603673094083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-89494952175698195672011-06-28T10:32:58.227+02:002011-06-28T10:32:58.227+02:00fits better = like the sea holds to the shore
Than...fits better = like the sea holds to the shore<br />Thank youcatherinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07779387220423530760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-66957689426384175072011-06-23T17:15:31.257+02:002011-06-23T17:15:31.257+02:00I like your title, by the way :DI like your title, by the way :DLuciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11971412294472606863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-64207579494329849382011-06-23T10:03:04.121+02:002011-06-23T10:03:04.121+02:00Agree with Gerjan's corrections ;) also I thin...Agree with Gerjan's corrections ;) also I think I hear "like the sea holds to the shore"?Luciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11971412294472606863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-44764186151410172552011-06-23T07:25:08.878+02:002011-06-23T07:25:08.878+02:00thanks for the corrections - nice job toothanks for the corrections - nice job toocatherinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07779387220423530760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14205348.post-54341469265417140302011-06-22T21:39:08.607+02:002011-06-22T21:39:08.607+02:00Nice job! I have a few corrections though:
You we...Nice job! I have a few corrections though:<br /><br />You were young <br />You had time<br />on your hands and I <br />Was a rollercoaster of the kind that needs to ride so high<br />to die so low<br />All the time I had to keep you close<br /><br />Not finally now<br />How we must have hurt<br />To see all of your love and care<br />Only work a little while and then I go<br />All the time I had Gerjanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09034119109200257196noreply@blogger.com